Observing our own work we know we need to add our ident, add a soundtrack and add credits. We need to shorten some clips and make the short cuts smoother.
What we said we liked is that when we zoom in on Olivia's face, we slowed it down because the zoom was too fast. The focus on the actor's face is not distracted. The actors kept composure.
What we need to improve is have a better location for filming and make sure we prepared thoroughly.